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Vengeance

See the pistol, pick it up,

Stretch, relax, and hope for luck.

Spin the chamber, check the gun,

Test your aim and have some fun.

Carefully devise your plan,

Sitting under the ceiling fan.

Remember the pain, the rage, the hate

Now is not a time to debate.

Cast aside your thoughts and feelings,

Focus on your lethal dealings.

Grab the slugs and put them in,

It’s time to cleanse yourself of sin.

Holster the gun and leave the room,

You beautiful agent of imminent doom.

Walk through the alley, do not halt,

Travel across the gritty asphalt.

Go to the house and open the door,

Show your target what’s in store.

Say your line, unleash the emotion,

Then keep yourself calm in all the commotion.

Raise the revolver, aim, and fire,

Send that bastard to the funeral pyre.

Empty the pistol, lower the gun,

Turn away, then take off and run.

You can go now, your work is done.
©2005-2009 ~lancet-moonshadow
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Author's Comments

This piece I just wrote because I wanted to delve into dark poetry again and I needed to write something again. It's not motivated my any personal emotions, I've just been thinking about revenge and stuff. It was partially inspired by various movies I'd seen, and can just barely be equated with a grim, harsh sense of justice. Read this with a grain of salt.

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O_O That's REAL deep, C. REAL deep. *holds* I don't know what to say, but vengence isn't the best way....Look I rhymed XP But all I can say is that everything will work out some how....Just keep moving forward. It doesn't always help to keep looking back...I should know...

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~Conformity - word the government uses when they want you to all be the same and play nice.
~ Normality - something that doesn't actually exist. (Face it, it's true)
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Pain is the greatest muse.

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私は悪意 おいしい
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This is true

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Burn the heretic. Kill the mutant. Purge the unclean.
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whoa! o_o i fscking love this poem! i didnt know you could write so well. :3 i love the rhyme scheme, and the emotion is so raw and strong...it made me imagine what that would be like, every step of the way. kinda gives me the chills. very nicely done.

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.:*Art comes in many forms*:.

"Weird thing? You have no taste. No wonder stupid people can't comprehend art...un. I'll personally teach you, art is a bang." -Deidara

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July 21, 2005
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